Daughter of storms
She survived the night her uncle tried to kill her. Now it's his turn to survive her.
About the Book
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Nine years ago, Brynja Stormfell watched her uncle murder her father and steal the throne that was hers by blood. She survived only because her mother ran, carrying her half-dead through the chaos while everything she knew burned behind her.
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The mourning year is over. Brynja is done hiding.
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Daughter of Storms is a dark, Norse-inspired romantasy following Brynja's fight to reclaim her kingdom, the found family she builds along the way, and a magic system with real teeth, real cost, and consequences that don't come cheap. Book One is complete: 51 chapters, roughly 140,000 words.
Content warning: this book includes graphic battlefield violence, an on-page execution, references to a child endangerment backstory, and explicit sexual content. If any of that isn't for you, no hard feelings at all.
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What I'm Looking For
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I'm not looking for proofreading or line edits, just your honest reaction as a reader. I want to know where the story pulled you in, where it lost you, what worked, and what didn't. Nothing is too small to mention, and nothing is off limits to criticize. If something confused you, bored you, or bothered you, I genuinely want to hear it.
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What's Involved
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Reading the full manuscript (roughly 140,000 words) at your own pace
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A short feedback form at the end covering pacing, characters, world-building, and overall impressions, plus space for anything else on your mind
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A rough turnaround of two to four weeks, though I'm flexible if you need more time
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I'll send the manuscript as a Word document or Google Doc, so you're welcome to leave comments directly in the text as you go, in addition to or instead of the form
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What You Get
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Early access to the full book before anyone else outside my own circle has read it, a genuine hand in shaping the final version, and my real, lasting gratitude. If you'd like, I'm also happy to credit beta readers in the book's acknowledgments.
If this sounds like your kind of story, I'd love to have you along for it.
